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Stoic


Watching you drive away
Stoic look on my face
No need for tears
You will be back
Life is a little harder
When you are gone
Not as sweet
Colors are not as bright
A quick I love you
To last through the
Loneliness that I know
Is on its way
Keeping me company
While you are gone

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  • Flowergirl
    April 8
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    very nice i love this one the work is so nice keep it up....


  • individuality gold member
    March 13
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    the one good thing about saying fareweel to someone we love is knowing the joy of their return.

  • Warrior7
    September 19, 2008

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    oh mate this is so heartfelt, i hope he is not away for too long. Big hug for you my friend


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww this is filled with sadness and love...it's so hard to go through the loneliness when the one you love leaves you for some time....
    But to know they will be back just keeps you going....

    Beautiful poem
    I loved it,
    XXJeannette