'neath sun bright skies
flowing fast & free
Lies a river steadfast
with fantasy
A peaceable kingdom
where hearts are light
Troubles are carefree
Hope is in sight
Waters are cool
with waves so serene
Bringing peace & contentment
to all who believe
No one knows when it came forth
this river so invincible
But if we follow it's path
it began with the Ripples
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt And Quote by Sandygram.
1000 points, ended September 26, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The poem and the background are both beautiful. Lovely flow and rhyme. Great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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very nice, picturesque, good luck
Linda -
This is a beautiful poem of rich, vivid imagery and serenity. After reading this I had a calm about me, a great feeling for sure! Thanks, and good luck in the contest.
Dennis
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wow this was really pretty...and I like how you split up the stanzaz into two sentences...very cool!! Good luck ♥
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A delightful read!!! Thank you.
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