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en-sync

let us fade into each other
blending like we belong
living like we love life

breathing with brevity
falling deeper within the rhythm
of our en-sync tempo

we march on creating the beat

to our own song

long and sensual

slow and spiritual

never knowing the lyrics

we just hum the beat

never caring about all the right words

we just hum the beat 

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so how do you feel
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Amaranthine lover

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    thanks for entering and sharing


  • HomeGrown
    October 5, 2008

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    Musically Delicious.

    As a musician, this makes sense. I can feel the undertow of power that this conveys, especially lines 12 on. Never need lyrics if you can keep a beat steady. It's the music that makes it work, the love, not the "I Love You's".


  • sailor ptolema
    September 24, 2008

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    me gusta lo mucho, brant .

    meg

  • Bob Fox
    September 19, 2008

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    My

    Where can I get some of this? lol But really it is a wonderfully refreshing piece of poetry. Love abounds dear poet.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Whoa. Once again, that is absolutely incredible. I especially loved the last four lines. So beautiful and carefree.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

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