the nightmares suround the desperation
somewhere deep within my hidden heart
craving a sense of romance or resarection
that rips at my mind and pulls me apart
a beautiful thing; life, with its hellbound face
starring in your curious, decieved eyes
forceing you to move along to a new place
with new hope thats filled with lies
a obssesion you cant let go
a person you love, like a drug
your losing controll
only to later be shoved under the rug
to be alone and forever lost
its always there
like destainy with a cost
for doing nothing but existing here
find love and also find mental death
a thing that wont ever go away
you regret love intill your last breath
something that will haunt you every single day
beg you may, it'll still haunt
leaving on your face; the pain, the tears
in your mind these words shall taunt
"you waisted your time through all these years"
and you think you can escape?
your wrong its not something you rehearse
or a sickness on which medicine you drape
its uncureable, to beat you down its loves curse
Author notes
i was inspired i worte this friday auguest,8, 2008 i just re - discovered it
A contest entry
- Show me your soul by poeticcaresses.
600 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a obssesion you cant let go
a person you love, like a drug. great line.
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thank you i just wrote what i felt i am always glad to know my audience is enjoying my work
♥ Lost Lover Poet
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Beautiful. Very full of emotion and longing. Very well written. I found one mistake.. looks like a typo. "you regret love intill your last breath" UNTILL not intill. Other than that great work. I love it. Good luck!
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Beautiful
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thanx
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