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falling

Laying in bed thinking of you,
how you broke my heart and tore it in two.

You made it so my heart feels dead,
I cut my wrist and lightly bled.


I hate my life i feel like dieing,

instead i lay there falling, crying.

 

I thought you loved me, I thought you cared,

with all the memories and good times we shared;

 

But all this time so quite long,

it turns out I was very wrong.

 

All I can think is I cant believe,

how I can be so darn nieve!?

 

I stare at fading walls, im falling fast,

I dont know how long time will last.

 

I cant see the ground below

but im falling fast, this I know.

 

Falling down at speeds so high

this time I wanted to cry,

I hit the ground, inside I die.

 

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this isnt how i really feel im in love!

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  • PrincessOfDecent
    November 7, 2008
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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love the word choice
    You're so talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • legitleah
    September 20, 2008

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    i feel your pain, but the rhymes just seemed a little to forced. Also you spely memories, memeries. Might wanna fix it.