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Society's Demeanor

Captivating roses pleasure the rancid terrorist
Tantalizing beauty excites the exotic find

Exhilarating pain frightens the tranquillizing traitor
Whole-grain wheat enhances one's mind

Puritan belief systems
Light shining on cosmic prisms
And youngsters just doing
As they are told

Arguments spawned
By a lack of education
With simple-minded traditions
Growing old

Portable iPod listeners and
Portable human waste dispensers
Are more common than cherry trees
And grass

The sight of pretty faces
Ignites lust in these places
And is overcome by the wailing
Of brass

Instruments were ringing
Choirs were singing
The critics are leering
But nobody's hearing

The world is sickening
And nobody's listening

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