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Nobody's Listening

I am different
I am same
I am fast
I am lame

Nobody's listening...

I am tearful
I am strong
I am everything
You've done wrong

Nobody's listening...

I am your worst nightmare
I am your favorite dream
I am a secret, and
I am exactly what I seem

Nobody's Listening!

I am death!
I am life!
I am starving
Ill, and Strife!

I am old!
I am new!
I am something
Strange to you!

I am black!
I am white!
I am the one who
Tells you goodnight!

NOBODY'S LISTENING!

I am beautiful
I am disgusting
I am truly
Not very trusting

I am telling you
Who I am
As my heartbeat
Is quickening...

But Nobody's Listening...

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  • hotpinkpenguin
    September 18, 2008

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    Wow, this poem is intense. I love the buildup of emotion, you are very talented. Gosh, I really love this. The only thing is that the last two lines are a little awkward, but, I still think it is amazing. Yay for you =D