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A Loveless Juliet

Oh heavenly poison
Caress me in this age of death
Come on and break me
Don't hesitate to take me
Far away from my last breath

Such heavenly poison
So sour and sweet
Your wonderful taste
Takes me from my feet
I lay on the floor
From you my paramour
Watching my soul escape from me

My heavenly poison
I have no time left
You've taken it from me
And given me death
See the whites of my eyes
As I lay down and die
Like a loveless Juliet


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  • xeroabyss II
    November 14, 2008
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    This is a perfect take on Juliets lament before she perished.
    Cheers!