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Seduction

He smiled
As she slid her hands down
All twelve inches
She felt latex against her skin
And cringed slightly
But with an inward smile,
She slowly took the knife in her hand
And stuck it in at one end, cutting
Meticulously
All the way to the other end
"What kind of sandwich would you like, sir?"

Author notes

I work at subway...the sandiwch place not a train. But...yeah. Random, sandwich related things cross my mind on occasion.

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  • BleedingDeep
    September 19, 2008
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    I wasn't exspecting that....


  • Paril
    September 19, 2008
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    xD

    This made my morning
    Good work xD

    -Paril


  • peridotPixi
    September 18, 2008
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    oh how cute, i love it socky
    keep up the writing
    ~Amy


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    September 18, 2008
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    Wow i liked this it actully made me laugh fer once :]

    ~Shelly~