My world is crashing down on me
As I see you laying there crying
And I keep thinking it's my fault
... cause it's my fault
chorus:
I see the scars on your wrists
I know I shouldn't have done this
I see the sadness in your eyes
and it makes me want to die
I had your heart, ripped it to shreds
That's one thing I'll always regret
You took my word that I'd never hurt you
I'm sorry for what I put you thru
I'm sorry for this sadness
breaking hearts is my habit
Some may say apathetic
I think I'm just pathetic
I do miss those blue eyes
Our moments frozen in time
I'll never hurt you again
...I won't hurt you again
Chorus:
These lies you believe
Those lies come from me
Take a deep breath and see
that it's my fault
...cause it's my fault
Bridge:
Never again, no never
I won't allow myself
To break your heart
to make you shed those tears
No, never again now
Will I cause you pain
I am just insane
For letting you go...
Chorus:
Author notes
What do you think???please leave a truthful comment, this isn't about anyone...
Freiden,
Liebe,
Und tokio Hotel
~Kiwi (heartless)
Hate it, love it, which is it, plz let me know.
Comments
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its a decent enough write, pretty good word usage, not too bad. i just don't see how it would be a song. it sounds like itd be one of those emo poser songs you'd hear from like...death cab, or any other random bands that write slow songs like that. lol
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1:thanx 4 the comment 2: this could so be a song and 3: omg u think death cab is a emo poser band
????? (like death cab 4 cutie?)
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hey kris... i loved this poem. one question tho, who is this about. you have so many guys now that i cant tell anymore...
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Its not really about anyone... but I guess the sadness thing could be about Eric and how I told him I wouldn't hurt him and well... I did. tlking about Eric, I really need to converse with you about that boy!
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It's a very heartfelt and agonizing poem. It will make people look at what they've done to people and at least I hope some of them will fill sorry about what they did and make their relationship with that person better. Great Work.
God Bless.
Matt
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Thanx for the comment.
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