So many secrets
So many lies
So many things
You have to deny
To many stretched truths
And dishonesties too
Can you ever tell
Whay really is true?
Deceit and deception
Tricks and Illusions
Life is littered with nothing
But worthless delusions
The only thing you
Can trust to be true
Is that every one is
Going to lie to you
But you lie to them to
That can’t be denied
The truth can’t be told
Too many times you’ve lied
Author notes
Ladybug lands on lee
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Very well written -
I enjoyed reading this, it flew along at a fast pace, and the rhymes, for me , were spot on -
the poem itself also rang home, because of having been in the situation both where people didn't know if i myself was lying, and for me not knowing if others were telling the truth - and it's never easy!
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"To many stretched truths
And dishonesties too
Can you ever tell
What’s really true?"
Suggestion Last line "What really is true?"?
This is wonderful. I say wonderful to very many things and this is one of them. It's a word I say it's no secret or lie. So I tell you truthfull the truth you need to hear that this is excellent and superb. Wonderful at least.
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thank you very much
i like hearing that my work is wonderful
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Wow this is excellent! I love your style. You should check out the contest on my page, I have 3 going right now and this would have fit any of the three!
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wow, its really beautiful <3
"Deceit and deception
Tricks and Illusions
Life is littered with nothing
But worthless delusions"
thats my favorite part =)
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Wow i loved the begining of this so much meaning
~Shelly~
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