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Simple Desires


One more day in this Paradise
my body full and oh so nice
smoothe shaven legs sheek'n clean
await your touch to intervene

I sit here a cool cucumber
though I am but one hot number
come lift my dress above the leg
do I really have to beg

fill me now and do it twice
smell the scents of cinnamon's spice
sitting here all ready for you
desiring now and when we're through

pure simple words of my desire
of what I like when lust is fire
be a gentleman, a caveman too
I'll love you both don't miscontrue








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I was having fun with this feeling miscontrued, leaving me not feeling so blue.

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  • evo-mx5
    October 15, 2008

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    Beautiful and Sensual

    Who could resist an invitation such as this. You have painted a such a sensual and inviting picture. It takes my breath away.

    Exquisite!

    Michael


  • perfectsunset gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Ooh very lovely write.
    Beautiful sensual descriptions
    and wonderful imagery.

    Great write!

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck


  • Confusedboy
    September 19, 2008
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    Excellent

    being human is natural, body and heart desire is needed to fill the emptiness, make us complete. Yes, in reality the desires are simple, nothing complicated. Its taking in simple things. I thought of maui, while reading this. lol. Sounds like you are on fire and ready to purr. You have shared much.