http://hougaard.deviantart.com/art/Washing-into-Darkness-98287895
What is this system we live in?
Do we undertand it?
Are we just an infinite cycle awaiting our fate?
Without life,
there can't be death.
Without death,
there can't be life.
Opposite immortalities,
feasting on the same mortal souls.
Without souls,
there can't be immortalities.
Without immortalities,
there can't be souls.
Thus death will overcome,
and destroy life.
Allowing life to create
new souls to overcome death.
This mezmerizing icognito,
will be our ultimate destruction.
A contest entry
- (Contest) LOTS of picture prompts to choose from by Paloszoo.
525 points, ended October 7, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Think about what will 'really' happen in the end.
Comments
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Without life,
there can't be death.
Without death,
there can't be life.
I agree. Nice thoughts, which give the reader a lot to ponder. Quite an interesting take on the prompt. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck! -
Hi, the picture credit goes in your author notes. The actual picture goes in the body of the poem. Thanks. I'll be back later to read ;-)
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