Wait now, look me in the eyes,
And take me home
Because these are heavy winters:
Heave clouds, heavy fog, heavy snow
And I cannot breathe;
So take me in your hands
And take me home,
Because this darkened domain
Is devoid of all life and emotion,
And I cannot sleep,
So sedate me.
Who now, will acknowledge me?
And take me home
Take me home!
Please now, catch me in your arms
Because these are cold winters,
And I cannot freeze anymore.
Please now...
Look me in the eyes?
Questions? Comments? Money? Please refrain from the first , but feel free to shower me in the latter two.
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This was truly wonerful. I liked it a lot.
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Thanks so much for commenting. Hope you're having a good new years.
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its so... perfect. I don't even know what else to say its just... wow.... yep just wow.
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Like I said, this poem is nearing perfection. That question mark, like I said before as well, completes the poem and increases its absolute awesomeness. It's so good I want to cry. Except not really.
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-stares you in the eyes-
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU MY SEXY HAWT DARLING HUBBY
Great poem!!!! So sad...something wrong?????? I told you its no problem to call me at 2am crying. You've done it before and you know I love talking to you!
love,
Mylee
rofl
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