My fate lay in tracks destined towards uncertainty,
Rounding the canyon with walls of graffiti,
But this ominous train assures my safety,
For just beyond the bend I know i'll be free.
There's a tunnel up ahead,
Through the winding ways of the sea.
I cannot wait to pass the bridge of faith,
And finally find the journey that awaits me.
As the engines start to rev I hear the call of destiny,
And next stop, undoubtedly, I know i'll be free.
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Superb
Intriguing. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine, my friend. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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