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A Thursday Afternoon

We sat on the sidewalk
You and I
painted by sunshine.

You traced my
palms
wrists
arms
lips
eyelids

with a fingertip wet with ice cold water.
The drips on the ground
evaporated
like flowers reversing their bloom.

Author notes



This never happened outside of my imagination...sadly.

Any helpful criticism will be much appreciated :)

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