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Infected Jigsaw





Bleak embodiment,
now ascending well below,
the infernal pit.

Where flames lick her sultry flesh,
the devils jigsaw puzzle.





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http://bloodyzone.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Girl-26735115
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Tanka

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  • jcat gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Crazy abstract that haunts the reader with dark and morbid imagery!!! w00t!!! Awesomeness~~~ Love it and best wishes


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Went to look at the pic.. and I think you captured it brilliantly here! Like the reference to "jigsaw" as she seems to be shattering into many pieces.

    Excellent dark write!