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The first time we met

I knew you were the one,
since the first time we met.
I knew I was in love,
your smile I can't forget.

As we were dancing in the moonlight,
underneath the stars,
you told me you loved me,
and we hopped in your car.

It felt like heaven,
you made me feel complete,
there is no one in this world,
who can take you away from me.

I feel like we are soul mates.
I feel we were meant to be.
I want to stay with you forever,
from now until eternity.

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  • Nature Song silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    From now until eternity! Isn't that how love is supposed to be! Awesome job. ~Sie Good luck in our contest


  • Darkmoon
    September 19, 2008
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    i love this poem. it's sooo sweet... keep writng and good luck


  • Lovesick6teen
    September 18, 2008
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    aww

    Thats so cute i hope you guys will feel that way about each other all the time ^^