I knew you were the one,
since the first time we met.
I knew I was in love,
your smile I can't forget.
As we were dancing in the moonlight,
underneath the stars,
you told me you loved me,
and we hopped in your car.
It felt like heaven,
you made me feel complete,
there is no one in this world,
who can take you away from me.
I feel like we are soul mates.
I feel we were meant to be.
I want to stay with you forever,
from now until eternity.
A contest entry
- ~ You Complete Me... by Nature Song.
515 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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From now until eternity! Isn't that how love is supposed to be! Awesome job. ~Sie
Good luck in our contest

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i love this poem. it's sooo sweet... keep writng and good luck


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aww
Thats so cute i hope you guys will feel that way about each other all the time ^^



