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Forever is lost

Mother nature provides and preserves at will
Yet, today when the fog had lifted, no thrill
A walk in the woods I didn’t notice the still
Staring at the river flow, I felt it’s chill

Nevermore’s raven cast a shadow on my soul
Carried me on hueless wings, left me in the cold
On dappled ground a shadow disappears
Raises up, settles down in deep rooted fears

Sunny days are forfeiting it’s pleasant
In rainbow displays at heaven’s crescent,
now gone as winter holds the wither ways
Fate has upheld it’s aims in the rains

My loss is greater that anything
Took sides with nothing, now everything
Seems to feel unreal, no peace around
Just a drape, a lonely brook abound

Forever is lost in the light of the sun’s eye
This is farewell, a final goodbye
I wish you the happiness of fall
Sometimes I just wish that you will call …

Forever is lost, the future beholds
The muted pain mutters as night unfolds

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Prompt: Missing you
Contest entry: Lost your Forever, Regrets

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Thank you for your most heart spoken entry, Josie


  • Restless and True
    September 19, 2008

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    I really liked the nature feel this piece provided. It was really well written and you have an awesome range of vocabulary which is really refreshing.

    I loved this

    Thanks for entering.