Ever so softly falls this
little stream,
Springing out of nowhere as if
from a dream.
Seemingly lost among the
many trees,
Hidden away, so very hard
to see.
Yet with renewed life
if flows,
It's trickling waters reflecting the
sun's brilliant glow.
So is the heart hurt, sad
and torn,
And tender emotions one has
openly worn.
With a new faith, a
bright hope,
Love like the stream flows soft,
strong down the slope.
its gentle, tender beauty so
hard to see,
Proving love truly is happily ever
after to me.
Author notes
I used option #3 for it found its way into my thoughts and heart.
A contest entry
- Lovingly Quoted by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended September 29, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Another amazing poem by you
Great job dad 
beautiful picture
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HEY MY SWEET DAUGHTER
Thanks so much!
's Just thought you might like something to refer to throughout the week.
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I think this is beautifully written!
Soft, flowing, gentle...just wonderfully done!
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of this contest!
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There's mysterious magic in all of lives varied hues tucked away in the trickling waters of the image only further embellished into a thing of beauty scribe in your verse.
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HELLO SUSEANN
Thank you so very much!'s I see so many beautiful sights that are hidden from eyes which do not take the time or make the effort to find.
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Beautiful
Great piece here and is this the little spring you find your peace and hope through you have talked about .I bet it is lovely there
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HELLO PATTY
Thank you ever so much for coming by to read this! This little stream was flowing off from a hillside by our big bike trail not far from my town in which I live. I have not ridden bike there for a long time now but it is a truly beautiful ride through woods for many miles.
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What a beautiful picture and beautiful words to match...lovely soft comparison to the soft flow of the light brook and love...you give such inspiration even in small writes...lovely work...best to you!
mystic
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HELLO MYSTIC
Thank you ever so much for stopping by and reading this!'s I always take my camera on my walks and find some beautiful sights of scenery and animals. To me I feel more love inside and am able to show more to others after I have been out and seen nature's beauty.
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Beautiful picture and beautiful words to follow. Makes you just want to sit and daydream a while... listen to the calm of the water...
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HELLO KRISTY
Thank you so much! This picture is one which I took a long time ago on a bike trail near my home, it is a big one which goes many miles. I am going to be posting other poems with more pics from this trail. I have not been on it for quite some time now and it is one of my favorite places.
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An Awesome Moment in Time...
I love this beautiful, yet sentimental poem, softly flowing peacefully from the heart... I wish you all the best in this contest!!! Take care, Cyn
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HELLO CYNTHIA
Thank you ever so much for coming by to read my little write.'s I have always loved nature and this picture is from my collection of scenery pictures. I love to take my camera with me on walks and I do see so many beautiful sights and animals. To me it is love happily everafter.
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This is such a beautiful poem. I just love the imagery and I'm really glad the return link took me to this page. Good luck in the contest.
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HELLO DAVISCTH
Thank you ever so much for coming by to read! I took this picture a while ago and this contest reminded me of just how much simple sights like this one reaffirms the feeling of love in me.
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Soo very beautiful!!! It is breath taking and the imaginary is great! Love how you talk about nature, and very good luck in contest.
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HELLO DRAMALADY
Thank you ever so much!'s I do love my nature, as a little boy growing up I lived with 60 acres of land on which to play and most of it was woods. I am now because of those times long ago playing in those woods among the animals and trees and streams.
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