See the blue, see the red;
Joy o’ eye for my head.
For me…
For any who see.
There’s green, there’s yellow.
One is hot, one is mellow.
Like love…
Comes from above.
If you want to see more,
There’s plenty galore to see.
It’s all like a sigh,
For each eye to see.
There is orange and purple
Even these seem supple
To touch…
I can almost clutch.
There’s so much in store
Like colors from the Lord
To see
For you and me.
If you want to know,
Just let Him show and see.
If you really want to know,
Ask and He’ll show. Just see.
Some are cold, some are hot
Some in love, some not
With Him…
The colors of man.
He made one, He made all.
Some rise, some fall.
Some will
Stand and be still.
If you want to know,
Just let Him show and see.
If you really want to know,
Ask and He’ll show. Just see.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt And Quote by Sandygram.
1000 points, ended September 26, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was a beautiful and uplifting poem. God created so many beautiful colors to surround us. Great write. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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beautifully penned
a joy to read, good luck...
Lin
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Wonderful imagery and thoughts in this inspirational poem. Strong writing, thoughtful work!
Best of luck in the contest.
Dennis
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Wonderful!
What a glorious write for the prompt & a lovely way of presenting His desire for us to ask, see & listen to Him! So glad to have read this on His Sabbath! There's no better write than a write to praise & adore Him! 
Great flow & consistency throughout! Love the way you started this piece & the way you bring it to conclusion:
If you want to know,
Just let Him show and see.
If you really want to know,
Ask and He’ll show. Just see.
When we really see then we understand! I'm sure you'll do well with this contest! Blessings friend.
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Beautiful...
I like this one...
Simply beautiful
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wow! this is so beautiful. an ode to God. i really like this last lines, i think it speaks so loudly:
"If you really want to know,
Ask and He’ll show. Just see."
thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. keep writing poet! God bless you always
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wow
i like this one a lot
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