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Desire

A feeling
of wanting something so bad,
you might do anything to get it,
even if it is something
as little as a chocolate bar!

Wanting,
a feeling so bad, tiresome,
painful and shattering...

Like waking up,
dying of thirst,
desiring just a small glass
of diet coke
to begin your day...

And then, there is the desire
everyone has..
To love and be loved,
to want to lie down next to someone,
and wake up in the morning
and find their arms around you..
loving you, caring for you,
embracing you, wanting you..

So many powerful desires
govern our lives..
some easier than others..
but when fulfilled..
you cannot help but *moan*,
you find yourself 'living',
wanting to give something in return.

Desire..

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  • raelaxdarkmoon
    October 23, 2008

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    Words can't really describe how much I like this its powerful yet subtle a really enjoyable read about desire.


  • Luckintheshadows
    September 23, 2008

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    oooh..this is great! what an excellent write! I love the descriptions of the different types of desire...really, such an amazing write. Thank you for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.