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Ramadan

What a joyous month Muslims have.

Good deeds and general goodwill occurring everywhere.

Praying and celebration more ongoing then any other month around.

Hunger and thirst not noticed much.

Praising of Allah gets more intense is seems as the month carries on it seems.

I still continue to celebrate.

Even if it seems I'll fail sometimes.

Though through all of this I never question why we do it.

 

It's been a countless tradition for how ever many years.

 

It still goes on and so will I. 

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 20, 2008

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    Very nice
    Just a thingy or two both in this line:
    "Praising of Allah gets more intense is seems as the month carries on it seems."
    the first is: "is seems" i believe you mean "it seems" and the second is that you have used "it seems twice" in one sentence.. it just sounds wrong or weird..

    Carry on with your fasting and you will surely feel good and happy.. and you will cease to fail

    otherwise great write, thank you for sharing and entering in my contest.
    Good luck.

    Nooni