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Haiku: Missed






a water microcosm
upon an upturned morning leaf,
I walk by











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  • Harrisham Minhas
    October 4, 2008
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    Wonderful.


  • donnz
    September 18, 2008

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    cool

    I saw a monk with bell, sliding one foot forward, ring his bell, slide the other foot forward, ring his bell... warning the microcosm on the ground / lest he cause distress to any living thing. This 'haiku reminded me of that. cool.