Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

wrong

my being is apparently something I've done wrong.
just another thing
my life been so hard but I've stayed this strong
it's just another thing

lovely dreams I've never told you
just some junk
hate of them i guess i emotionally grew
just some more junk

life
love
apparently I'm wrong

Author notes

I'm sick of their talk when they don't know what it's all about. They don't know the half of it, they don't know me.

any advice?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • sweetfire
    September 20, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    very good holli, full of feeling.. i likes it