If you care...
Poke me, hug me, wave,
let me know your there,
Give me a hint,
that you even care.
Speak to me, talk to me,
I'd be your teddy bear,
Take my hand please or kiss me,
Please, If you care...
A contest entry
- ERG........Whatever You Effin Want by fairytalelovestory.
400 points, ended October 6, 2008, 34 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come One, Come All - The Circus Is In Town by lowercase prelude.
4000 points, ended October 15, 2008, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Angry?!! Show me just how angry you are... by starving-to-survive.
1250 points, ended January 25, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so... liek it??? i finally got around to posting again
Comments
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Wow, so few words but so much motion!
Unfortunatly i cant feel the anger too well. I can feel your hurt, your pain, betrayl, the fact you are crying out for the love of this person. Maybe this is where the anger comes in, im not sure, i guess i just couldnt feel anger as much more sad, and pain.
But aside of that, this is a fantastc write.
Your words really hit me hard.
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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