on the outside looking in
is close enough for me
perfection, neatness, organisation
is not my eye candy
i live a life of chaos
a higgeldy piggeldy life
balancing my time between
being worker,writer, mother, wife
but every now and then
i dream of a sanctuary
away from it all but inside i know
its just not meant to be
for me, i love my lifestyle
and wouldnt trade with you
so i must be carefull what i wish
or one day it may come true.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration X by Samplette.
2000 points, ended September 19, 2008, 12 entries
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you know what it freaks me out because rite at this moment i have this feeling that i want my life to be somthing its not because im going threw this chaos but i think about it and i know that if i keep thinking this and my actions will change my husband just mite tell me one day were getting a divorce, so very great poem...
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A different take on the picture. Nicw work...maybe "organization?" for "organisation" and "higgeldy piggeldy...?????" I enjoyed the concept.
Thank you for entering
Sam
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thank you for the comment
higgeldy piggeldy is a saying we have for things that are random/without order 
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excellent mom
Hi mom remember me. I'm not onlime much these days life's caought up with me... well a beautiful message here mom...we ought to be what we want to be no matter what great idea mom ?
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of course i remember you sunny i could never forget my darling firstborn son
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I love the way this poem makes you think, its wonderful
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