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Hope

When all is lost
And white turns to gray
When your comforting voice
Starts to waver and sway

Listen to the silence.

Even as dawn
Goes back to night
And you shiver with cold
And imminent fright

Listen to the silence.

For when we close
Our open minds
It is in the silence
We will find
Our one emotion
Strong and true
The one that rings
Inside of you

Listen to the silence.
For from silence comes music;
the music of hope.

The silent music of hope.

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  • rokchik1
    September 19, 2008
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    thats really good. keep up the good work i bet if u keep going youll go far


  • trekkergirl
    September 19, 2008
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    This is a wonderful poem. Very nicely written and a great inspiration to all.


  • Heavens Child
    September 18, 2008
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    Simply beautiful! This piece truly touched my heart. Best wishes to you in the contest.

  • machine
    September 18, 2008
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    WOW

    This truely is a very beautiful poem. You seem to have a lot of talent. Keep up the Great work!