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Stormy weather

Missing image

Hauling down the street she came

knoked pillars, trees and my heart

In dismay I wondered what had happened

But no answer

All was dead and damned

In rage I began to wonder

Tried to keep my nerves intact

Said wait don`t panic

Sat in front  of screen all night

Waited cursing, hopping

There you`d come

I could see your face my darling

I could feel your touch

Your smile made me hallucinate

Oh how I longed to be with you

like I always had

but you were not there

Then a fit of madness came

As the storm began

To destroy all she found 

In her wild ran

Had no pitty

Had no mercy

Sucrifice she asked

To what purpose

I imagine, jealous of our love

But my darling know no rain

No storm can touch

Our love is Heavens present

No one, but no one can harm

I love you my Judy

My sweetheart.

 

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  • campanaro silver member
    March 13

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    Such a beautiful write

    It displays such soulful feelings and loving dedication.This was amazing my friend.
    Take care
    Love Peace
    canpanaro


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 7, 2008

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    Wonderful Write!

    Wow, what a powerful poem of love you have written with such amazing imagery . It brings out the emotions the poet has wirtten with.
    A pleasure to read.

    You take care, Sandy


  • LilyRose
    September 23, 2008

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    Such beauty beheld at the breast when nature in her entirety cannot uproot your love. I hear the gale winds winding catastrophic intentions as the warming depths of your heart shelter love. The hearth of passion kissed by her sweet lips of your eternity. My emotions are delightfully silenced now. Very fine write my poet friend


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    SO HEARTFELT!!!

    Oh yes! love sure can be a rocky road at times, rough and hard.


  • unavailable
    September 18, 2008

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    This is beautiful!
    Did you use 'u' instead of 'a' purposely in some of the words?


  • vici377
    September 18, 2008

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    so very moving..can feel the emotion in this one my dear brother..yes..love is heavens gift to us.

    But my darling know no rain

    No storm can touch

    I love this part..thanx so much for sharing my dear brother..blessed be...

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