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Kaptin Kitty

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Ahoy all ye land lubbers
Ye barnacle crusted curs
best run before me cutlass
makes fish bait out of yers

I am the mightiest mouser
to ever fly the skull
an' when I go a vikin'
I take a fearsome toll.

Don't let me blue eyes fool ye
as others 'ave before
for I'm a pirate truly
an' fearsome to me core

So render up yer treasures,
the best you must bestow
some tuna or a bit of cream
then I will leave ye go.

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  • petalblue2
    October 9, 2008
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    Fearsome indeed...LOL! Very amusing, congrats on the honorable mention!


  • you make me smile
    October 3, 2008

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    Sounds so "pirate-ey" so much that it makes the kitty come to life. Simple and full of hilarity. Well done & congrats on the HM


  • toomysterious
    September 28, 2008

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    Love this, so light and sweet, reminds me of a kitten who showed up a week are so ago begging (pirating) and I can't resist, she must stay outside though the mateys inside would object ya know. Good luck in the contest.


  • BluesMan gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    This poem left me smiling. Such a cut and clever entry for this contest. I can tell there's a special place in your heart for animals. Great write Ed


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    So cute!!!! Works perfectly for that pic


  • KayJay
    September 21, 2008

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    What a great poem LOL You've captured the "fearsomeness" of this little kitty and penned a truly wonderful tale (tail? ) The humor and warmth of this is magical... Well done!
    Ken


  • PurringKitten silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    SIMPLY ADOREABLE

    I love it!!! now this poem will warm the hearts of any reader and bring a little chuckle for sure...has my vote


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 18, 2008

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    Now that is just too cute. I think you ran with the picture and definitely captured a humorous go on it. Great language and all.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    lol Well if that cat's got the cream and the sardines I suspect he already has the treasures he desires lol. Clever and cute C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Your take on the picture prompt is great. Enjoyed reading your piece.
    Juls

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