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This is who I am

I have the gift of thought, of imagination,
and creation that go together with
the eloquence of expression.

I have an inner eye that allows me to see things
that no one else can.

I see fire in a snowstorm
and ice in a volcano.
I hear music in the wind.
I see a rainbow on a cloudy day.

I touch the people I meet in various ways.
I show them how to be angry, how to love,
and to hate. For this is who I am.

Author notes

You wanted to know the word I used It's poet.  For that is what I am. All I did was look the word up in a dictionary and took it from there. Hope this is what you want. I kind of like it myself. The picture is of lord Bryon I found on the internet. I credit whoever put it there.

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I don't why this is but this does have only 15 lines. I don't know why it keeps saying 19. I counted them myself.

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 5, 2008

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    very nice

    You describe a poet very well. They see a different side of things sometimes. Poets write about things that others have trouble expressing. You are a poet! The Shaker


  • Mad Moon silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    A beautiful description of a poet, my friend. I especially loved the first two lines in stanza three. The use of "oxymoron" there is great. Thanks for entering, and good luck!


  • toomysterious
    September 30, 2008
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    Excellent description of a poet, but I would enjoy more rhythm and flow. It just seems dry to me.


  • quantumsurveyor
    September 30, 2008

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    The machinery (as all windows based software! Heehee) can't count. Fifteen delightful lines with a bit of a "but" for me. The final verse just doesn't have the harmony of the others but.....what would I know?

  • piccola silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    Nice way to express what a poet is. Poets do affect people in so many ways making them feel so many different emotions. My opinion is that if we don't make someone feel with our writing; we haven't done our job.


  • Lovesick6teen
    September 18, 2008

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    Its good

    But you have a spelling mistake in line 3 its not eloguence its either eloquence or elegance, which ever word you ment to put there.


    • trekkergirl
      September 19, 2008
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      thank you I have fixed the problem. Fingers tend to do their own walking at times if you know what I mean.

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