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~ Delightfulmess ~

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     of all the days one may remember
     your birth stands out among them


     upon this date new dreams began
     and possibilities were imagined

     the circle of life God ordained
     throughout generations
     became manifest within you

     flourishing from your first steps
     to those you take today -


     toward the destiny that awaits you

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  • gypsyjo
    October 4, 2008

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    Always Wonderful!!!!!

    I loved your choice of words and style. Simply stated and Simply beautiful. Honestly I've never been disappointed reading your writes. You're Great!!!


  • felicitisdancer
    September 22, 2008
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    good

    i love the photo


  • LionessK
    September 19, 2008
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  • Age of Rain
    September 18, 2008

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    A very touching write! I am sure she took it deep to heart. Wonderful Birthday wishes that anyone would be honored to receive!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    Awe.... What a great piece for me on my birthday!
    I love this.
    Thank you so much for your entry in my contest.


    Delila


  • TheRealDeal
    September 18, 2008
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    Circle of life manifested within, flourishing from first steps toward the destiny that awaits... the very thought behind those words just sort of makes the spine tingle a bit and places one just a wee bit higher above the ground. Good luck in your contest here 1der.
    JLG


  • Midnight Lace
    September 18, 2008
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    I was sitting trying to think of which lines I like the best, but the truth of the matter is, I like them all. I like the thought behind the circle of life being manifested in those who are born. I also enjoyed the closing lines. Good luck in the contest.
    ~Midnight Lace


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 18, 2008

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    I simply love this, especially on a special day like this, Tender wolf's Birthday, so this is a great write one to read. You brought out the excellence of the beginnings of a new life and the hourney to which it follows.
    Fantastic.

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