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Heart Strings


Gentle fingers pluck and strum
heartstrings in melodic hum

The tune, an ancient melody
firm in Love's fidelity

Caress the soul in passions dream
across the miles, longing streams

Wading in, the depths to find
caution slipping out of mind

Gentle fingers,  deftly play
carrying my heart away... 


Author notes

For my sweet Julie.

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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    A tender cadence resonates from the dance of these heartstrings, poetically singing love's song. Lovely to see the usage of fidelity too,

    Poetic Harmony.

    Heart Shaped Poetry

    Kudos.


  • galfalfa gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    Each word in this read like it was a gentle strum over heart strings,
    Beautiful!

    galfalfa