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Autumn's Cover

 

 

 

In Autumn all the world’s aglow with fires of red and gold
as towering spires sway in the breeze, the leaves will lose their hold
a russet carpet on the ground the pattern very bold
a mulch to cover all the earth and keep out Winter’s cold

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    June 3

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    I adore this one, autumn is my favorite season, and I could just see those reds of New England as I read. Beautiful


  • Swan song gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    I think you are an outstanding poet and obviously others do to. Congrats on the gold.


  • EeyoreUK
    September 22, 2008

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    I love the imagery in this. Autumn is such a beautiful season. Thanks for sharing and congrats of the trophy. Best of luck with future writes.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    wow S how do you continue to make this magic through the seasons, i want to get my mittens out now, love it..hug you xx


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 19, 2008
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    A dance of dandies in period costumes. I can hear the music. Wonderful, Sue.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 18, 2008

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    I'M LOVING IT SUE!!! Every word reminds me of fall back in Va. I can just picture the leaves turning from green, to red gold then brown and eventually falling off the trees onto the ground!!! It is such a very beautiful time of the year!!! I LOVE IT!!!

  • Judith Chandler
    September 18, 2008
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    great rhymes. I notice the flow right away, well done.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Sunshine Always
    September 18, 2008

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    I see you love Autum as much as I Sue....Beautiful words for a beautiful season..good luck in the contest...mal


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    A quadquat!
    Delicious poem

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