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Subject No.2

They wheel me in

Place my carcas upon the table

Plug their tubes into my flesh

Draining my dead body to an empty husk

Sewing my mouth and eyes shut

Pumping me to the brim with fermaldahyde

Preserving my decaying flesh for the worms

Removing my brain, heart and lungs

Grotesquely displaying and weighting my organs

Examining and bagging for disgusting disposal

Laying my body in a box to be buried in the ground

Forever forgotten by the world

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  • Heroesrox
    December 14, 2008

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    Hate it, but not the poem!

    I hate the fact that that is the ending to a human life. Sucks big ass! It really upsets me....but a great poem nevertheless. Good job on this and your other capturings of the rituals that are Disgusting Humanity.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    wow a brilliant poem of the undertakers day getting the body ready for the underworld to be forever forgotton


  • ckwriter69
    September 19, 2008
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    Yes whoa the undertaker. I like your descriptions. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.