as the wind shift the season of gleam,
Fire laid her hands before the tree
Soften the thuds, breaking Summer's fall free.
Crisp carpet laid before the stream
as the wind shift the season of gleam,
Fire laid her hands before the tree
Soften the thuds, breaking Summer's fall free.
as the wind shift the season of gleam,
Fire laid her hands before the tree
Soften the thuds, breaking Summer's fall free.
In a list
A contest entry
- 50 Quatrains by Judith Chandler.
450 points, ended September 20, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely-expressed.
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LOL...
You snagged me! 
Lovely poem, but I was expecting a Haiku here! 
Love the imagery & rhyme here.
Nice quatrain. Glad to see you won a trophy!
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thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. I love these emotions . where did you get them? Saddie23
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I realy liked this. Short and sweet, very enjoyable. I like your ryming and choice of words, it turned out to be a wonderful write. I also like the picture. It seems perfect for the poem and I love the way the colors just seem to pop. Nice write, keep the pen flowing, and hope all is well
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This has such lovely flowing lines. Well done
Mariana
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Saddie23
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pretty good
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This is unique and very beautifully crafted. I admire so much being said in few words. A very prettty piece of poetry indeed
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Thank you
Thank you for the sentiments given.I like the applaudes too. Saddie23
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Summer's fall? Is that a play on words. If so, it's a nice one.
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Thank u
Yes, I'm glad you liked my poem. This my first quatrain written ever. Thank you for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. Saddie23
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This is beautifully written and I love the photo with it.
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Thank u
Thank you for the wonderful comment. This my first time writing a quatrain. I'm glad you liked my poem. Saddie23
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