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Jag

A jag is a spree
Sounds fun to me
One day or three
All excessively
whatever I choose
I'm going to abuse
I think I'll pick booze
It's so happy and loose
Beer starts off my flight
Drink rum through the night
Bloody Mary's at light
I access my plight
I still got a few buck
So I'm up on my luck
Flop in my truck
head over to Huck's
Many drinks through my hand
This binge has been grand
Pack up the band
It's time that I land
My money's all gone
Two days is quite long
I sing a blue song
I admit that I'm wrong

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  • boeing bettie
    November 5, 2008
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    What a fun rolick through a drinking binge. I really enjoyed this!

  • evelynxxoo
    October 17, 2008
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    been there done that had fun sounds so bubbly some how i cant picture you doing this well you need to let your hair down dont you


  • humblpye gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    I like this...!

    Jag, huh! "a period of uncontrolled activity" lol,oh yeah...! it's a raunchy lil' bit of rumblin tumblin down to earth stuff...sure can identify with this...brings back some ol' road days for sure lol!
    keep on jaggin sis
    John


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry into my contest. Enjoyed the read.
    Juls