To move a mountain is heavy,
rocks are jagged and rigged
man in dreams struggles love,
he builds his mountain steep
a hike into his mind will be
necessary to understand love,
his safety felt from mothering
the love he only knows,
haunts his opening to you
your love can dissipate into hatred,
where Mom always has love for her son
this mountain you must nurture
or he will never move
Author notes
'I know it makes no sense, but what else can I do,
How can I move on when I'm still in love with you... '
The man who can't be moved
my user name:kkatie55
A contest entry
- & this is love? by Kiss the girl--x.
525 points, ended October 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved the natural images you created in this, and the ending:
'this mountain you must nurture
or he will never move'
thanks for entering
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considering that the poem is written for the quote prompt this does make sense, I think I like this very much.
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