what are we
without sensitive senses
touch sends signals
that fills blood into every vain
skin is scanner
par excellence
tactile sense of it
unbeaten by any instrument
at times
we can not tolerate alertness
we make them numb
drinking beyond
chewing bubble gums
suppress vibrant senses
that interfere with moods
allow free rein
senses are best friends
In darkness touch helps
eyes vibrant in light
without those feelings
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we are not poets
sportsmen, saints or sales men
Author notes
senses is life
A contest entry
- Be Inspired by Your Senses... by harriet567.
450 points, ended October 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked your take on the promt the imagery is great and without our journey into the feelings of our sences we not write great selections of poetry brilliant dad take care
marina
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Wow, you write up a storm don't ya?
chewing bubble gums?
Well, I guess I like this poem better than that other one.
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thank you so much
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