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Olympics in China

Games,
heat,
energy,
stamina,
hard-work,
aspirations,
fears,
vitories,
defeats,
half defeats,
glory,
feeling sorry,
culture,
for future,
gold,
silver,
bronze,
fire crackers,
lightings,
new structures,
money spent,
money earned,
and tons and tons of,
goodwill.


That was Olympics for you.

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and tons and tons of,
goodwill.

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  • Summer52
    October 2, 2008

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    I've been reading all your poems here and don't know where to put my comment. I chose this one cuz words used here were simple...

    Nice meeting you, sgking123.


    summer51


  • LymphBeauty
    September 18, 2008

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    I liked this but I felt like i was reading the list and brain storming for a great poem! ty for your kind and sweet words they are highly appreciated!
    and whatis this AP thing that you are starting?

    ::huggs&kisses::
    LB


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    September 18, 2008

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    I really like the form and word choice in this poem. It's like one must shout these words with all his/her might.

    Nice first entry and good luck!