You've got me thinking
is this what it's going to be like
are we always doing nothing.
And you, you never show your emotions
but we know you have your insecurities
that's probaly why you have the jealousy
Were supposed to work together
help each other somehow
and i dont think that you really understand me
or belive in what im sure i can achieve
Someday, looking back you'll realize
where it went all wrong
and hopefully you'll learn
and never do it again
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And you, you never show your emotions
but we know you have your insecurities
that's probably why you have the jealousy
this part of the poem is amazingly great and the whole poem is too good
i really like your work
keep it up


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TRULY HEARTFELT!!!!
There are times when one just cannot help the one they care about, they only hurt. There seems to be so much of one way love.


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well..really...I do apologize...really...I'm sorry


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wow, you care so much.. even when they can't see it!
Good Luck, my heart goes to you!






