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You and Your Insecurities

You've got me thinking
is this what it's going to be like
are we always doing nothing.

And you, you never show your emotions
but we know you have your insecurities
that's probaly why you have the jealousy

Were supposed to work together
help each other somehow
and i dont think that you really understand me
or belive in what im sure i can achieve

Someday, looking back you'll realize
where it went all wrong
and hopefully you'll learn
and never do it again


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  • sOuL
    September 29, 2008

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    And you, you never show your emotions
    but we know you have your insecurities
    that's probably why you have the jealousy

    this part of the poem is amazingly great and the whole poem is too good
    i really like your work
    keep it up


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    TRULY HEARTFELT!!!!

    There are times when one just cannot help the one they care about, they only hurt. There seems to be so much of one way love.


  • rollingzen
    September 18, 2008
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    well..really...I do apologize...really...I'm sorry


  • fallenAngel86
    September 18, 2008
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    wow, you care so much.. even when they can't see it!
    Good Luck, my heart goes to you!