There is something, a small word
That I have always wanted to tell you, Kara
The feeling I get when I look in your eyes
And see your feelings for me there
The sensation I feel when your skin is on my skin
The warm feeling of your your laughter reverberating in my ears
The shivers that run up and down my spine when our lips touch
One word, just one little word, sums up how I feel our passion
Connected by one word, a word that burns with a fiery desire
One word, Kara, will tell you all that I feel
The word is . . . . . . . . . Love.
Author notes
I wrote this when Kara and I were good friends, and I had no clue how to tell her how I felt. We're together now, best friends for life. I love you Kara!
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From September 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2100 points, ended February 6, 24 entries
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Comments
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This Is Soo Sweet. Love It!
Thankyou For Sharing
Love Always
Ericaa x -
aww
that is so sweet wow, i am so glad you found a perfect person.... she better take good care of you
love
your angel
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aww
aww thats sweet
i hope nothing comes between you guys
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This is sweet, the feelings are very real, and portrayed as such. It's amazing how you feel when someone feels the same about you... The darkest night can be pierced with the brightest light
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a nice and simple piece thanks for entering
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fearless and bold is your soul!
we salute your courage and heart of fire!
flamesdragoness
Lair of Dragon salute you..and are eager
to view your poem of introduction submitted into
the group read list!
well done poet!
you have a good strong heart!
flamesdragoness
The Lair of Dragon salutes you!
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perfect in every way, good friend, just perfection at its besy
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♥_♥
This poem have pasion, love and it sounds good nice job..
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