I'm waiting for you tonight
Blinded by all these city lights
It seems so right to believe
I can see, it will make our world complete
Enter my world, let me show you
What we can be, and what I've seen
How can I leave without you
Please, please
Working, all this time
I've closed by mind to this wasted life
So much wrong but I can hear
A distant echo of something clear
Its certain to be true
My hopes and dreams they lie before you
Can you see my belief
The visions of our future life, they call on me
Enter my world, let me show you
What we can be and what I've seen
How can I leave without you
Please, please
Author notes
Written as a song
Comments
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Aww well done really lovely reminds me of some past times I've had great write
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Dunno wot to say to this piece... tis kinda heartbreaking but there tis a lil hope in it. beautiful.
hugs,
georgie,
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Hello and thanks for your comment.
Heartbreak is the reason to give up.
Hope is the reason to go on.
With best wishes from Scotland
Tom
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A deep and meaningful write that draws the reader headlong into the feelings wrapped up here. Excellent...mal
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BEAUTIFUL! TOUCHING!!
Words that show how true and caring you heart is, asking of that special person to come to you with open arms and heart.
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Wow this is soooo moving deep and profound!
You have penned a piece here which is very deep and far reaching Tom, and amidst the appeal within how could anyone refuse that?!
Lovely moving and heartfelt sentiments so eloquently penned and great too on rhyme and flow.
Loved this bit..
Its certain to be true
My hopes and dreams they lie before you
Can you see my belief
The visions of our future life, they call on me
A lovely spiritual visionary feel here which is well animated by the poetic graphics and vivid imagery of belief and hope, procuring inspiration and reaching right out to the reader and subject of this penning.
Lovely and so beautifully written, hey you are a natural Bard and will go far, just never stop writing ok!
Well done, love it bravo! Write on please!
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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