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In Recognition of the Flight of Time

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Why weight a soul down with a stone
when winged we purport to beat
angelic exits through the heat?
Why anchor souls to earth who've flown?

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my own photo

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    If I deconstruct this, it seems awkward. If I don't, but take it in with a single sweep of the eye, it's magnificent and crystalline. Wonderful again.

  • Judith Chandler
    September 18, 2008

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    I like this reflective, philosophical write. Like the thoughts and the form. Good questions here.

    Thank you for entering my contest.