Showers

Eyes that see pearls in the droplets,

immersed the heart in the tempest's

intoxicating watery ballet,

the spirit tasting in any storm

its glistening symphony of passions,

finding in its refreshing song

a dance of hope

to cleanse the mind

in a serenading waltz

of possibility's rainbows.

Author notes

47 words
Picture #1, from photobucket

A contest entry

Overnighter Picture Prompt(s) Contest. by delightfulmess. 450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

By me, right now

Adding your comment:
Aussie Gypsy
September 20, 2008

Edit | Reply

What a beautiful, sensual dance you speak of. The visuals were paraded before the reader beautifully. Congratulations on your shiny bronze trophy. Best to you
Alyzeh
September 19, 2008
Edit | Reply

Congratulations on the trophy! You've done a great job!
tara wilson
September 18, 2008
Edit | Reply

congrats!
Age of Rain
September 18, 2008

Edit | Reply

Firstly, I like the way this looks. The format itself reads well. This is once again filled with the beauty that you spout off almost without trying (seeming).

'watery ballet,
the spirit tasting in any storm'

lovely work!
delightfulmess
September 18, 2008

Edit | Reply

OOOh I love the opening line.
Such a eloquant take on this prompt.

Loveing this take!
Thank you for your entry in my contest.

Delila
Starz of Heaven
September 18, 2008

Edit | Reply

This is a very nice take on the picture I love it thank you for sharing nad goodlukc to you in her contest best wishes and much love always be well
IansCyberspace
September 18, 2008

Edit | Reply

"a dance of hope to cleanse the mind in a serenading waltz of possibility's rainbows." Considering that depression (storms?) is the most common ailment in today's world this invitation to cleanse the mind of things negative dance (rejoice?) in hope and see the beauty of rainbow's possibilities is timely advice indeed. Thank you for sharing this.
hotchocolate
September 18, 2008
Edit | Reply

Love it this is wonderful!!!!