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That is all I ask...

Let me feel you
sitting by my side
hold my hand
to give me your support

that is all I ask

Let me feel the life
that rests inside you
restore mine
with just one breath

that is all I ask

Just allow me to love you
your my life's mate
someone who wasn't easy to find
through these rough times

that is all I ask

Author notes

Something I felt like writing after I heard a song on the radio
9/17/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 21, 2008

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    My friend it is good to see your pen is back and this is a heartfelt poem. Keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing


  • Mgreen
    September 18, 2008

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    I can tell this is true to your heart, and I admire your openess and being frank..."that's all I ask."


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    This is so sweet!
    Sometimes it's quite difficult for some
    people to open up their hearts like this.
    I love the thought that you put into this
    write. Well done my dear friend!




    Jeremy0826