~A Love Letter To Money~
Dear Money,
I know, it's been a long time
sence I was able to spend, We were just getting to know each other ~
and you even became my bestfriend. I held you tight inside my pocket~ and my spendings became worse, I think somehow I was given a curse, and guess what? It even left a hole in the bottom of my purse. I tried my best to keep you in my hand, and I realize, that this is hard for you to understand. I'm sorry for what I have done, I know, I let you go one by one. But all I can do is apologise, and I realize, I must keep you safe. And put you away and learn to save, I'm trying so hard to be so brave.
If only I could gain your tust...
I know, I let you down, And I was spending you all over town. I caused you pain and tears, This has been my addiction for so many years. But if I could only have a second chance ~ I know I can do much better, I'am begging you for your forgiveness~this is why I'm writing you this letter!
I don't want to loose you ever again,
You and I will always and forever be bestfriends!!!
Love you always,
Stacey!
A contest entry
- Rhyme Town-The Sequel by Slick99.
500 points, ended September 21, 2008, 5 entries
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Yeah, I have money coming in I guess, but no idea for how long. =/ Anyway I spent some of my heard earned monies today and yesterday. It would be nice to have extra and not have to worry about it at all.
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wow this is interesting i liked it alot.
Nice Write!
Keep up the great work
~LadyLuff~ -
Rhyme Town
lol this is pretty good. thanks for entering!!! good luck in my contest!!! -slick99
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LOL
Oh I can identify with this well enough, to be sure, to be sure!!
Poor aul money; it gets abandoned by everyone, and put into cold dark places [tills or safes]
nice job! -
That was hilarious. I liked the rhythm, it all went together so nicely.
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