Slither under my skin,
upgrade my veins with your
otherness and mercy
denied.
I want you inside my
epidermis, my faith is
lost
looking in your eyes
demons laugh as they
posses laughter, happiness,
and replace with sin,
sin, sin me again
your voice possesses me
and leaves me a diazapam
junky from your touch
digitalis twists and
holds me in your grove,
the touch of cold marble
against my s
k
i
n
your skin
where I end you bring me
to pleasure and a private
hell, I don't want to leave.
A contest entry
- Slither Me by grm.
21300 points, ended October 3, 2008, 20 entries
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I like--a haunting poem--requires thoughtfulness--well written Pretty Lady.
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Oh this is scary indeed
My heart goes out to all the young people who have traded pure joy and life for one from a shot or pill or spray for the instant it starts life falls back within itself and the whispers from within takes the lead . Whispers of deatruction its an evil seed . To never know what life holds in the future often never seen .I so hope you arent taking anything of this nature for pure joy cannot be found in drugs for drugs always brings you back to a place of sorrow where real joy flys higher and higher ever day it never lets you fall along the way.
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where I end you bring me
to pleasure and a private
hell, I don't want to leave.
Wonderful lines. I think I've been here before. This was a great read! Enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest! -
delightful demonolgy
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I like--I ve read it 3 times--it is complex with more to it than meers the eye with only one reading.
bw
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