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You

You're not looking at me, I know.
    Sometimes I know.
But as I gaze,
as I stare,
I can't help but think
    Of what you're hiding.
Everyone hides something.
About their past,
about their home,
about their friends,
and everyone
hides their desires,
their loves.
I hide my need
for you.
As I gaze,
as I stare,
I wonder.
    What are you hiding?
Your past?
Your home?
Your friends?
And of course
your desires,
your loves.
Your desires,
your loves.
Sometimes I wonder
    could they include me?
Because I desire you,
because I love you,
I want you to need me.

Tell me the truth: Lame or Extremely Lame? Like so lame that you want to puke.

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  • aidenspektor
    September 18, 2008

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    GODDAMMIT THAT STUPID THING DELETED MY COMMENT!

    nice job...nice repetition. it's very good...very wanty That's not a word, but yeah. I'm using it. Shoot me. Very nicely done...I'd give it a 9 or something...hm...I....like....ell...i...ps...es...yeah... nice job