As Raindrops Fall.....

Under veil of...
passion's seduction,
soul drenching rain
{cooling desire's heat}
clings to blooming ampleness,
igniting stimulating delight.

Rhythmic movements heating fires within,
imagining your touch
with intensity,
{dreaming of you}
as raindrops fall in harmony
with every beat of my heart.

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PROMPT:

Picture #1
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20-50 words (~41 used)

A contest entry

Overnighter Picture Prompt(s) Contest. by delightfulmess. 450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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intanglio2ring
September 18, 2008

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WOW!
You got this one certainly down to a tight romance!
Wonderful!
Tang
Age of Rain
September 18, 2008

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I find that the bracket use in this poem was effective.

'soul drenching rain'

I loved that line; it was wonderful!

'as raindrops fall in harmony
with every beat of my heart.'

That made me go awwwwwwwwwwwww! Great job.
delightfulmess
September 18, 2008

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Awe... What a sensual delight!
So romantic and beautiful.

Thank you for entering this stunner in my contest.

Delila
StarEyes
September 18, 2008

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What a beautiful read this one is! I know when standing in the rain, I think of rain drop kisses, sent to me from Heaven, and the peacefulness it fills with me is just amazing! What a great job you did on this one!

Best of luck in this contest!

and love

Nyetta
Cannonsfire
September 18, 2008
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Just reminds me of how much I am in love sigh...beautiful work
Age of Rain
September 17, 2008
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<3 Wishing you luck as well